Carebearpuncher's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Punk Gurl]

I would definitely brush up on anatomy friend.
i like the color scheme. but the body is all warped and uncomfortable looking.

YukiMaara responds:

Thanks

[I know I have a soul]

oh man the nostalgia

Flyley responds:

Good old days of Final Fantasy :)

[Weird space creature ship thing]

I'm having a hard time looking at the canvas, the closest thing to a focal point is the random reflection of light on top of the dome. everything feels out of place as far as background, mid-ground and foreground are concerned. I'd go back to the drawing bored and figure out a better composition :)

RalyzArt responds:

It was just a doodle, hence the super clever name, but thanks for the feedback! I may use this to create something intentionally in the future. We'll call this one the rough draft.

[Standoff]

Good energy piece, amplified by the neon colors good job

MADcraw responds:

Thank you man, very much appreciated!

[Buu-stop]

Lovely color palette, also i admire your background work since i struggle with it.
only on thing bugs me slightly and that is the fact that there are no shadows to ground your character to where she's standing. I think adding some shadows would honestly enhance this piece

MatthewLopz responds:

idk maybe, it's kinda weird idk if having a shadow just for the character would look any good, i think it's more the problem of drawing the character correctly to the perspective, i always start with perspective lines, and there's no easy way to draw a character on a perspective other than practice, maybe also the fact i made the shoes alittle too dark toned it doesn't pop out with the ground at all, you're right with the critic btw but i don't think shadows is the way to fix it.

[late night super mario odyssey]

Love the color palette

ZenEdit responds:

thank you :D

[Grampa Gohan meeting goku]

I like the camera angle, the only thing that bothers me is how muddy the colors look. have you tried using different colors for light sources besides white? and shadows that are darker cooler hues. it would def make this piece pop

ZenEdit responds:

carebearpuncher your right i think its because the tablet i use some spots looks darker compared to the post i will do that now though thank you so much

[It's too geen]

I like the direction this is going.
But I'm not seeing a focal point so my eye is wondering all over the painting and it's kinda straining.
I like the colors, and at the same time there seems to be a lack of composition which kinda enhances the lack of focal point and last of all there seems to be the same level of rendering throughout the whole picture,as well as the same shades/hues of color throughout the whole which kind of makes it a'll blend in together and seem blurry. I suggest maybe diluting some of those brighter colors on the background with a light blue or so to kind of create the illusion of depth and so the background doesn't blend with the midground and foreground.

V1KK1 responds:

Thank you for your input :)
I'll keep this in mind.
It's true as you say the picture lacks a bit of dept. I need to go away from one colour only scheme more and work with all of it. I have some struggles when working with colour though. Its easier with black and white for me but I love bright colours aswell.

[Inktober Day 14: Strung Up]

I can dig the hellraiseresque theme here, but the execution could use some polish. I'd definitely work on the propritons, and on making things feel a little less flat.

Dooffrie responds:

Agreed! Thanks for the critique my dude.