I can dig the hellraiseresque theme here, but the execution could use some polish. I'd definitely work on the propritons, and on making things feel a little less flat.
Agreed! Thanks for the critique my dude.
I like the contrast in the two styles used to draw on here
Hey thanks! It was definatley an experimental thing. :D
I dig it
diggin the textured feel
as someone who struggles with backgrounds, this is goals for me
Have you tried some 3D before? if you want to do interiors that helps a lot, Sketchup is a free software from google and quite easy to use., if you have any specific questions just ask, i am always happy to help (for drawing :p not 3D modeling, i don't use that much 3D :p)
The lack of a focal point makes it tiring to look at I like the bugs but it could've been executed a little better as far as making the comosition at least creating some sort of path for the eyes to flow around the piece
Thanks for the review
lovely color palette but, the proportions feel slightly off
yeah, I think you're right
love where you're going with this but the palette looks a little muddy , i def wouldnt be afraid to do a study on fabrics either
Sure I will try thanks for the feedback.
this is a nice pose, i'd probably shift it a bit so she wasn't completely in the center so the composition would look a little more interesting. and it looks a bit flat, i'd definitely work on the foreshortening and Proportions. otherwise i dig the colors
thank you for your constructive criticism :0
I am gonna pay attention to your advices in my next piece
Could use a little more polish
Interesting silhouette though
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